Rhyming Quatrains with a Rhyming Couplet envoi poem regarding thoughts of death...
Grateful to Richard for finding the perfect artwork for my poem and helping me along my journey writing poetry.
this poem is so beautifully written, Lisa! i mean it, it is amazing and once i read the first verse, i just couldn't stop until the very last one. very comforting words, but also advocating to the roughness of nature, the contrast of love and death, light and darkness... thanks for sharing this with us!
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
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2 Weeks Ago
What a fantastic review! I read this yesterday and thought i had replied... I do think I did but for.. read moreWhat a fantastic review! I read this yesterday and thought i had replied... I do think I did but forgot to press Post Comment.
Thank you so much!
A musical way of writing. Really enjoyed your poem.
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
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2 Weeks Ago
Musical way of writing... now that is rather interesting ... would you read my newest two, please an.. read moreMusical way of writing... now that is rather interesting ... would you read my newest two, please and let me know if you think they are also musical?
Temptation and Desires Withering Vines.
I would really appreciate it.
Lisa
this poem is so beautifully written, Lisa! i mean it, it is amazing and once i read the first verse, i just couldn't stop until the very last one. very comforting words, but also advocating to the roughness of nature, the contrast of love and death, light and darkness... thanks for sharing this with us!
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Weeks Ago
What a fantastic review! I read this yesterday and thought i had replied... I do think I did but for.. read moreWhat a fantastic review! I read this yesterday and thought i had replied... I do think I did but forgot to press Post Comment.
Thank you so much!
This is a stunning verse. A sonnet to comfort all who grieve, for surely there is a brighter heavenly light beneath which we will rejoice eternally! Your envoi is simply perfect! So nice to read your work!
Posted 1 Month Ago
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1 Month Ago
Wow, you certainly are Johnny on the spot. I know you will love the site. It runs so smoothly...no g.. read moreWow, you certainly are Johnny on the spot. I know you will love the site. It runs so smoothly...no glitches and not actual continuous contests.
And the writers on her are true poets.
What is great is that when you review you can read all the reviews before for the poem... Makes the poem really come alive.
I am so excited that you joined.
This will be such fun.
Love to you,
Lisa
P.S. Perhaps sounds like a Sonnet, but it is a Rhyming Quatrain with a Rhyming couplet envoi.
.. read moreP.S. Perhaps sounds like a Sonnet, but it is a Rhyming Quatrain with a Rhyming couplet envoi.
This is the way I really write...
Goodnight,
Lisa
1 Month Ago
Ah! Well, there you go! It felt as eloquent as any sonnet I've read! Thanks for referring me here.. read moreAh! Well, there you go! It felt as eloquent as any sonnet I've read! Thanks for referring me here, Lisa. I'm quite excited about exploring the site!
1 Month Ago
This is a fairly easy site.
I am very involved with the perfect font, color, size and image. .. read moreThis is a fairly easy site.
I am very involved with the perfect font, color, size and image.
There are amazing icons that provide everything except the image, but that you can easily get from Google and just move one. You can easily resize the image to make it fit the way you want it to.
On thi site I have all sorts of poems... A few are seductive.....some I wrote when i ws 20 years old...
Now I am off to read yours before going to the beach, first time this year and it is only 5 minutes away! We plan to be there at 8:15 and spend two hours and then go to the gym and spa...
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I just finished reading your poem "Forevermore" and I have to say, I am completely blown away. Your words are so powerful and evocative, and they really touched me on a deep level.
The way you use imagery to create a sense of place and mood is truly masterful. The idea of lying down on a bed of lavender is so peaceful and calming, and it really sets the tone for the rest of the poem. And the way you describe the ocean, with its waves and caves and blue waters, is so vivid and beautiful.
Your use of language is also really impressive. The way you've structured the lines, with their rhymes and rhythms, gives the poem a sense of flow and musicality that's really pleasing to read. And the way you've chosen your words, with their soft sounds and gentle alliteration, creates a sense of intimacy and tenderness that's really moving.
But what really struck me about your poem is the depth of emotion that it conveys. The way you describe the love between two people, and the way you explore the idea of life and death and what comes after, is so powerful and moving. Your words really touched my heart, and I know they will stay with me for a long time to come.
Thank you so much for sharing your gift with the world. Your poem is truly a work of art, and I feel honored to have had the chance to read it.
Posted 2 Months Ago
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2 Weeks Ago
I just can not believe that I did not respond to your glorious review of my poem. My only excuse is.. read moreI just can not believe that I did not respond to your glorious review of my poem. My only excuse is that I broke my clavicle and shortly after that I broke three ribs... All of this on my right side... And, I am right handed...So, I was unable to type for quite some time.
I do remember your review and came back to it just moments ago to write you a big thank you.
I am so humbled by your gracious words my friend. You have a beautiful way of writing down your thoughts.
I have now reread my poem and your review several times and my heart is filled with joy.
Lisasview, now in Spain
You have expressed these lines in such a beautiful and poetic fashion that it leaves a heartfelt impression. You are welcoming your new journey with open arms, as you lie fondly inculcated with the meaningful memories, lessons and insights gained the way through. You are drifting in a divine direction, where etheric ends will meet, and spirit will ascend. In this next journey, you shall drift again with newfound grace, in a timeless travel that doesn't map destinations, but sets destinies through boundless horizons. The colours will flow and dance again in each new creative rhythm, as fresh realities bloom, in the afterglowing essence of the bygone experience.
Kind regards,
Archishman Rick Dasgupta
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
You message is so beautiful...much like a poem itself... I plan on keeping this and receding it ofte.. read moreYou message is so beautiful...much like a poem itself... I plan on keeping this and receding it often..forever...
Thank you so much for truly understanding the meaning of my poem.
Lisa
So beautiful! I could see the picture you were painting.
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
Thank you much for reading and reviewing my poem Addie..
I think you might enjoy my poem Mile.. read moreThank you much for reading and reviewing my poem Addie..
I think you might enjoy my poem Miles Apart.
Lisa, now in Spain
Romance writ so well. I like this a lot. The language and the wording brings me calm. And dare I say it memories.
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
Thank you so much Ken for reading and reviewing my poem. It is for sure the most read of all my wor.. read moreThank you so much Ken for reading and reviewing my poem. It is for sure the most read of all my work. (I keep a book of the names of every person that leaves a review of my poems..) Probably bit obsessive but I do enjoy looking and seeing which are popular and which are not.
This poem is actually about thoughts of my own death....
Lisa
You write the form poetry so precisely...wonderful. The meter and the words you choose to convey both love and loss flow so easily and the rhyming is not forced. Very enjoyable. I see you like to post an image with your poetry too. Lydi**
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
Thank you so much for your very kind review... This one was written about my own death... My thought.. read moreThank you so much for your very kind review... This one was written about my own death... My thoughts about it...
Glad you enjoyed it...
Lisa
Like a rhyming crossword puzzle, but much more intricate in that it holds such emotion, this poem shows how much work you put into it. I like that you chose lavender as the color of the print. It flows like honey.
Posted 4 Months Ago
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4 Months Ago
Thank you dear Soren ...I love your review!
I too love the colors.. I chose these to represen.. read moreThank you dear Soren ...I love your review!
I too love the colors.. I chose these to represent my poem.
Lisa
I have been writing poetry and short stories since I was 10..so 64 years!
I have never connected with any groups but recently thought why not..
So here I ..looking at where this adventure leads me. more..