Forevermore

Forevermore

A Poem by Lisasview
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Rhyming Quatrains with a Rhyming Couplet envoi poem regarding thoughts of death... Grateful to Richard for finding the perfect artwork for my poem and helping me along my journey writing poetry.

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     Forevermore....


Lie me down on a bed of lavender;

naked, I will be in the blazing sun.

Upon death, to this earth I surrender …

for, my journey here with you is now done.


Remember my laughter in ocean's waves …

floating along with no care in the world.

As we hid inside of deep dark sea caves,

our eyes met softly, as blue waters swirled.


Kissing your salty neck, I held on tight

with loving thoughts....I drift to you again,

watching day's sun disappear into night,

knowing our true love's depth would never wane.


Beyond life, into your open arms I soar;

our souls entwine now ~ and forevermore....

© 2022 Lisasview


Author's Note

Lisasview
If you happen to read my poem I would so appreciate a review.
I always review..
Thank you,
Lisa

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This is a romantic poem, written with that dreamy sense of passion and surrender that can come from a woman's heart. 'Naked'... 'I surrender'.. 'Kissing your salty neck'.. Even 'Forevermore' is a romantic fantasy. But the words flow with smooth and soothing pleasure, caressing the reader and lifting us from the harsh world of reality to the delight that ought to be. I hope your muse, like your love for him, will never wane.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

4 Days Ago

Oh gosh dear Jibey... I too hope my muse will never wane... I am about to put on another poem that y.. read more
Jibey

4 Days Ago

It was a pleasure, Lisa



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This is a romantic poem, written with that dreamy sense of passion and surrender that can come from a woman's heart. 'Naked'... 'I surrender'.. 'Kissing your salty neck'.. Even 'Forevermore' is a romantic fantasy. But the words flow with smooth and soothing pleasure, caressing the reader and lifting us from the harsh world of reality to the delight that ought to be. I hope your muse, like your love for him, will never wane.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

4 Days Ago

Oh gosh dear Jibey... I too hope my muse will never wane... I am about to put on another poem that y.. read more
Jibey

4 Days Ago

It was a pleasure, Lisa
Howdy do Lisa in beautiful Spain...

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

Wow! Lucky you howdy do. Enjoy every moment. Life is short.
Lisasview

1 Week Ago

That life is short is so true... As we get older...well, at least for me I see how short it really i.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

I totally agree. You are welcome Lisa in Spain and not Pissa in Italy.
It has beauty. It has class. It has the classic feel. The journey of forevermore starts now. Your style is music to the ears. You are really soaring in love and poetry.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

My pleasure. I felt it. You are welcome Lisa in Spain.
Lisasview

1 Week Ago

Thank you,
Lisa
Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

::::: )))))))))))))))
I see so few Shakespearian sonnets. Pleasure, this one. Lovely place to have softly meeting eyes. So thank you, Lisasview.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Week Ago

So very nice to know you enjoyed my Rhyming Quatrain..not really quite a Sonnet... I did actually wr.. read more
a soft and deeply touching love poem Lisa, kudos....

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much...This is about thoughts of my own death...Weird but true..
Lisa, now in Sp.. read more
There's so much passion in this writing. We hid in deep-sea dark caves..." that line and everything to follow was so well chained together. Wonderfully explained and expressed poem. tyfs

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Week Ago

Hi Cyprian,
I just noticed that I never thanked you for your lovely review... I really though.. read more
Cyprian Van Dyke

1 Week Ago

You're most welcome. Sorry for the late reply. I'm not on here that often.

Different .. read more
Lisasview

1 Week Ago

I definitely believe that being different is good...
Lisa, quite early in Spain
Lisa,

Having lost my wife of 49 years this past January, a beautiful girl and woman I had met and loved since she was 15 years old, this piece of your heart set to pen of page speaks to me in ways that I cannot voice, nor express, for the pain remains fresh as though I saw her dying just yesterday ... All I can say is that this poem is poignant and reaches right to my heart in its beauty and expression of undying love ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Weeks Ago

Marvin,
I just read your review to my husband and he too was moved deeply by your words...he.. read more
Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much, both you and your husband ...
Lisasview

2 Weeks Ago

You are most welcome
I absolutely adore your writing within this piece, Lisa from Spain, I was enthralled, but please put it in black on white , I truly feel it would add to the gravity of it, wouldn’t change your words of course though , wonderful as they are,

Lathen

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

3 Weeks Ago

Good morning Lathen,
I am so delighted that you adore my poem.
Your thoughts about the.. read more
Ah, in a word beautiful. The meter and rhyme very natural and fitting. The second stanza is my favorite.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lisasview

1 Month Ago

Funny, I just responded to your response on your poem, and gave you a few poems I wrote that I thoug.. read more
What the purists would say true poetry. A lovely piece of writing Lisa.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much Andrew,
Being new to submitting I decided to go the route of "True Poetry" .. read more

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Lisasview
Lisasview

Benitachell, Alicante, Spain



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