My father was born in Russia and, at age two moved to Cairo.
He told me he got dressed like a beggar, and knocked on his front door. He was always a character! He died at age 96, still sharp ...
the story steps forward instantly .. the star of "My Father" ... i find the rhythm and rhyming add a beautiful flow to the whole ... nothing trite nor foreign in those rhymes ... everyday language elevated to your quatrain ... that's what i think Ms. Lissaview!
E.
ps. an incredible pic .. a rare treasure i am sure .. sounds like he had a great sense of humor .. :)
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
I believe the photo was taken by his father, who was not only a great painter but also photographer... read moreI believe the photo was taken by his father, who was not only a great painter but also photographer... I have masses of photos...
Thank you for reading and reviewing and I am so delighted you liked it...
He was quite something...
Lisa
It's always good to hear about the back story to a piece of work, and how lovely you got to share many years together. A poignant reminder to enjoy our loved ones. Thank you
Posted 5 Months Ago
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5 Months Ago
What a sweet-heart you are to read my poems...I really appreciate it.
Lisa
1 Month Ago
Good morning from very hot Spain,
I am going back over every poem I posted on this site to ma.. read moreGood morning from very hot Spain,
I am going back over every poem I posted on this site to make sure that I have thanked everyone that left a review of my work... And, I see that for some reason I missed yours...so here is a belated thank you!
Lisa
It is quite a touching poem. I am sorry for your loss but his memories will surely live on, as you've stated in this poem. Beautifully written.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
My father died several years ago at the age of 96...
Thank you so much for reading and revie.. read moreMy father died several years ago at the age of 96...
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing...I really appreciate it.
Lisasview, now in Spain
the story steps forward instantly .. the star of "My Father" ... i find the rhythm and rhyming add a beautiful flow to the whole ... nothing trite nor foreign in those rhymes ... everyday language elevated to your quatrain ... that's what i think Ms. Lissaview!
E.
ps. an incredible pic .. a rare treasure i am sure .. sounds like he had a great sense of humor .. :)
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
I believe the photo was taken by his father, who was not only a great painter but also photographer... read moreI believe the photo was taken by his father, who was not only a great painter but also photographer... I have masses of photos...
Thank you for reading and reviewing and I am so delighted you liked it...
He was quite something...
Lisa
Nothing can truly fill that sense of safety for a small child that a father can give, you captured that perfectly:) I love the picture and footnote you mentioned about him being a little trickster LOL
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Hi Robert,
I am so sorry about being tardy replying to your wonderful review... I broke my cl.. read moreHi Robert,
I am so sorry about being tardy replying to your wonderful review... I broke my clavicle and 3 ribs so I was unable to type until recently...
Lisa, Sunny day her in Spain
I felt the words; deeply painful and sentimental. A precious picture of your father you shared; gone but not forgotten. Lived a long life with hardships. May he rest in peace with his daughter keeping the memories alive.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Yes, Sami, I do keep him alive by speaking of him...
Actually, I was never told of any hardsh.. read moreYes, Sami, I do keep him alive by speaking of him...
Actually, I was never told of any hardships... I think he had a great life, always doing what he wanted to do...
Thank you for your review...
Lisa
A touching tribute to a father who was very special and wonderful. Gone but not forgotten. Expressed in perfect meter and rhyme, this soulful poem endears itself to your readers. Beautifully written, dear Lisa!
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing yet another of my poems... Seems you have a bit of time .. read moreThank you so much for reading and reviewing yet another of my poems... Seems you have a bit of time while you are recovering.
My father was quite something. He spoke 11 languages and traveled the world making movies..
Lisa
Hello my new friend ... first of all i just love the photograph of your father .... how different times were then .
My own father passed away 50 years ago now , but still his image and words are clear in my mind .
This is the purpose of memories ... to keep love alive :)
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
The positive words our parents say to us are never lost...never forgotten..
Thank you for you.. read moreThe positive words our parents say to us are never lost...never forgotten..
Thank you for your review...I so appreciate it,
Lisa
I was touched by the sentiment in your tribute to your father. I don't know much about poetry structure but I sure know a lot about love. This is a winner !!
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
What a lovely heartfelt review...
Thank you so very much,
Lisa
Well done you for attempting new forms Lisa. I found the rhyme scheme interesting. This is a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your Father’s memory. It is clear to this reader how much he was loved. 96 is a good age. Loved the tadpoles.
Chris
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Thank you Chris,
One of our Sunday outings was to go to a park close by and catch tadpoles an.. read moreThank you Chris,
One of our Sunday outings was to go to a park close by and catch tadpoles and feed the squirrels..
Lisa
1 Year Ago
Such wonderful memories Lisa. They can bring on a smile :)
A lovely share and a lovely write. Hats off to your father such a accomplishment in his journey of his survival.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
This is the first poem I have ever written about a family member.. I enjoyed writing it.
Not .. read moreThis is the first poem I have ever written about a family member.. I enjoyed writing it.
Not quite sure what you mean when you say in his journey of his survival....
Lisa
1 Year Ago
We all have a journey and survival is more of how we make a living.
I have been writing poetry and short stories since I was 10..so 64 years!
I have never connected with any groups but recently thought why not..
So here I ..looking at where this adventure leads me. more..