My Father

My Father

A Poem by Lisasview
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My father was born in Russia and, at age two moved to Cairo. He told me he got dressed like a beggar, and knocked on his front door. He was always a character! He died at age 96, still sharp ...

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My FATHER ...


With crying and dismay my father died …

remembering his sky blue eyes once more.

Although, not young, his loss I cannot hide

upon my morning walkings' quiet shore.


With much of him, my memories fill dreams;

of tiny tadpoles caught in nearby streams.

Along wet edges, I played without fear;

I'd always known my father would be near.


Joy's starlite opens Heaven's dreaming past,

as silky drops of twilight linger on.

True, time has passed, my father dear is gone …

still knowing, dreams of him will surely last.

© 2023 Lisasview


Author's Note

Lisasview
This is my first try at a Rhyming Quatrain.
Would love to know what you think about it.

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the story steps forward instantly .. the star of "My Father" ... i find the rhythm and rhyming add a beautiful flow to the whole ... nothing trite nor foreign in those rhymes ... everyday language elevated to your quatrain ... that's what i think Ms. Lissaview!
E.
ps. an incredible pic .. a rare treasure i am sure .. sounds like he had a great sense of humor .. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

I believe the photo was taken by his father, who was not only a great painter but also photographer... read more



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It's always good to hear about the back story to a piece of work, and how lovely you got to share many years together. A poignant reminder to enjoy our loved ones. Thank you

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

5 Months Ago

What a sweet-heart you are to read my poems...I really appreciate it.
Lisa
Lisasview

1 Month Ago

Good morning from very hot Spain,
I am going back over every poem I posted on this site to ma.. read more
It is quite a touching poem. I am sorry for your loss but his memories will surely live on, as you've stated in this poem. Beautifully written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

My father died several years ago at the age of 96...
Thank you so much for reading and revie.. read more
the story steps forward instantly .. the star of "My Father" ... i find the rhythm and rhyming add a beautiful flow to the whole ... nothing trite nor foreign in those rhymes ... everyday language elevated to your quatrain ... that's what i think Ms. Lissaview!
E.
ps. an incredible pic .. a rare treasure i am sure .. sounds like he had a great sense of humor .. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

I believe the photo was taken by his father, who was not only a great painter but also photographer... read more
Nothing can truly fill that sense of safety for a small child that a father can give, you captured that perfectly:) I love the picture and footnote you mentioned about him being a little trickster LOL

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Hi Robert,
I am so sorry about being tardy replying to your wonderful review... I broke my cl.. read more
Robert Trakofler

1 Year Ago

Ouch! I am so sorry!!!!
I felt the words; deeply painful and sentimental. A precious picture of your father you shared; gone but not forgotten. Lived a long life with hardships. May he rest in peace with his daughter keeping the memories alive.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Way to go! You are welcome 😊
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

For sure....Thank you
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Long live Egypt and the Nile along with all the heritage.
A touching tribute to a father who was very special and wonderful. Gone but not forgotten. Expressed in perfect meter and rhyme, this soulful poem endears itself to your readers. Beautifully written, dear Lisa!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing yet another of my poems... Seems you have a bit of time .. read more
Ayvid N

1 Year Ago

It was my pleasure. You're so welcome.
Hello my new friend ... first of all i just love the photograph of your father .... how different times were then .
My own father passed away 50 years ago now , but still his image and words are clear in my mind .
This is the purpose of memories ... to keep love alive :)



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

The positive words our parents say to us are never lost...never forgotten..
Thank you for you.. read more
Stella Armour

1 Year Ago

my pleasure :)
I was touched by the sentiment in your tribute to your father. I don't know much about poetry structure but I sure know a lot about love. This is a winner !!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

What a lovely heartfelt review...
Thank you so very much,
Lisa
Well done you for attempting new forms Lisa. I found the rhyme scheme interesting. This is a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your Father’s memory. It is clear to this reader how much he was loved. 96 is a good age. Loved the tadpoles.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Thank you Chris,
One of our Sunday outings was to go to a park close by and catch tadpoles an.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Such wonderful memories Lisa. They can bring on a smile :)
A lovely share and a lovely write. Hats off to your father such a accomplishment in his journey of his survival.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

This is the first poem I have ever written about a family member.. I enjoyed writing it.
Not .. read more
andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

We all have a journey and survival is more of how we make a living.

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Added on March 2, 2023
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Lisasview
Lisasview

Benitachell, Alicante, Spain



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I have been writing poetry and short stories since I was 10..so 64 years! I have never connected with any groups but recently thought why not.. So here I ..looking at where this adventure leads me. more..

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