About a boy

About a boy

A Poem by tayla timpano
"

(not Nicholas Hoult).

"
Dark places remind me of you.  
Everything reminds me of you, but especially dark places.  
The dark corners of cinemas.. 
the dark corners of parties.. 
behind the shed once.  
Your hands were always cold.  

© 2012 tayla timpano


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I like the sharp withdrawal, really nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice work! Really appreciate the last line of the poem that was a pretty talented way to end it. Keep writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I agree with Khalid's review.
nice poem tho

Posted 11 Years Ago


remembering him only in dark places means you are not still sure of the relation or maybe you feel you shouldnt be with him then, it can tell also that he was source of safety and security for you...nice writing but confusing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The write doesnt indicate when these encounters were good or not.....? Im curious. :0)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on April 22, 2012
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tayla timpano
tayla timpano

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