Secrets

This is an old poem that I wrote years ago

I reveal my secrets to him
in a way I haven't done ever.
I was played as a fool it's true,
Never tell secrets, they say, never.
I poured out my heart and betrayed my fears, 
in return for one favor, one thing.
I wanted to know what's haunted him over the years
and his answer bit with a sting.
"Nothing I would tell people about."
He stated. A rather distant reply.
I was played, ridiculed without a doubt,
A fire rose in me hotter than a thousand suns in the sky.

Reviews

[JaneFoxscale]

Really well written! I love the constant rhythm of this poem,it seemed to sing. Keep it up.

[Pamcocoa]

Thank you so much! I am really glad you liked it.