Love Potion 2C-2R-4-13

Another fine collaboration with the beautiful imagery of Craig Froman!

 

Love Potion 2C-2R-4-13

Stars in heaven like brilliant lace
Cannot compare to your lovely face
It's clear the Deities took their time
With each and every curving line
Perfect eyes to shine at night
Your smile is just the perfect light
You brighten me in every way
your voice to me my sunny day
Your words like wind lift me up
In your touch you fill my cup
Rain of joy anoints my cheeks
Loves sweet kisses softest meeks
The world within your eyes is mine
And golden light around you shines
Rainbows of golden promises tender
Gilding honest me, thy Lover's splendor
Silver rain weeps on your skin
Let our lovers' dance begin
Lithely left foot swings the Beat
Luscious right foot ever so Neat
You sway and the earth stands still
I'm captured by your crimson will
Soft speed, let us not delay,
time is nigh and thou art fay
Lift me with your life divine
The world is right when you are mine...

Author's Note

What a great time...Craig took the odd couplets and I the even, I hope you all enjoy our Potent Potion!

Reviews

[Gandré]

ohh this was a great experience and the AA BB rhyme was a perfection. I am illuminated with warm loving brightness now. also a pointe - ending, made the depth of your poem. I loved most "Let our lovers' dance begin
Lithely left foot swings the Beat / Luscious right foot ever so Neat " ---------what a play..

[Angel's Lady]

Silver rain weeps on your skin
What a beautiful line...and so wonderfully written. Great job.

[wizthom]

when words are not good enough to express the true meaning of ones soul,
then lend and ear to a poet who takes you on a tour of pure running emotions,searching for the ocean of affection called loves expressions,,beautiful my friend i am jealous,peace wizthom

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, Robin! This was so exciting to work on with you! Love the beauty of the font and the richness of your words. Amazing how it all melts together!!!

[KAREN BROWN]

God that was beauitful.You write wonderful,great work.everything just came together smooth.thank you for sharing it with me.

[Dani California]

Robin, this is simply stunning! What a beautiful, romantic, lovely piece this is. You and Craig did a marvelous job!

I'm with Seri ... you two blended perfectly. I could'nt tell the difference, and usually that sort of thing jumps out at me.

Excellent work! :) As always..

[Seriana]

What a lovely piece you two. You collaborate well together. This one I could not tell the difference. Wonderfully penned with such wanting emotion. I loved every word. :)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Truly a divine potion indeed. Kudos to you both. Ah, to have such words written about oneself would be so annointing and splendorous - you muses are beautiful people for certain. Thank you. A true delight this morning.
Light,
Siddartha