Tryst with destiny

 

An immacute dream or reality

be held an angel blessed with serenity

like a goddess she was adorned

within her the soul of venus was reborn

 

her thoughts spread like cancer

of which she was the only cure

was I heading for another tragedy?

with her being my only remedy

 

struck by love at first sight

looked every bit fiery as aphrodite

her torso as ravashing as the ardent sky

she swayed like a princess, so shy

 

her voice was a musical symphony

every moment hoping she was my destiny

her warmth so intoxicating like venom

within her I wished I could blossom

 

her skin quenched of thirst

lips red with indomitable lust

from her eyes radiated divine love

there was no world beyond and above

 

All that i hoped for was certaintly

in this tryst with destiny

that you and I last for eternity

her life was now my integrity

Reviews

[Dakshta]

Very nicely written, loved it! :)

[Pankaj Lohia]

thank you dakshta.. :) just trying to improve om my writing.. still an ameteur

[Dakshta]

After writing such awesome poems if you think that you are still amateur then that would mean that I'm a new born in the writing field :)

[Pankaj Lohia]

haha.. no you are pretty good. :)

[Dakshta]

ah well if you say so :p

[Zoya Sahai]

Beautiful write.. Each stanza is put just right. Thanks for sharing this!

[Pankaj Lohia]

thank you for the review zoya :) much appreciated

[Zoya Sahai]

You're welcome! :)