re-birthday

i wish i could run out of breath

and embrace the grace of sweet death

to undo all of me that's left

and have a nice deep longing rest

i wish to be reborn

to be someone else every morn

to stare at the old and undo

then start over to begin anew

i guess i'm asking for a re-birthday

and let the past just wash away

under a new name and a new me

only then can i be free

give me the sign and say it's okay

let me know it's better to have a re-birthday

 

Reviews

[Lexi =]]

I think most people have wished this. I know i have. Great poem i know exactly how you feel. i love it! For some reason these to lines are my favorite part >>>i wish i could run out of breath
and embrace the grace of sweet death.

[Ember]

I think that your poem is intriguing and fresh. I can feel the longing in it. It's greatly written.