Mass Movement

Mass Movement

A Poem by paperwizards

To all the hot young blood that danced with me and stepped on my toes
And kissed me
In those throes of mindless energy

The fury of the young, bring it out
Bring it on!
It is good and it is right and its strong

No preconceptions in the moment
Music is the moment
A collective outwith body, mass movement


© 2018 paperwizards


Author's Note

paperwizards
Not finished with this one, but a start, I think!

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Such a great start! Music does have a way to move us all!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like the way it moves so far. I'd suggest that "and stepped on my toes" be on its on line, but everything else is great. Great start!

Posted 5 Years Ago


A very good start. I felt really energised thinking about all those music festivals I attended and still do.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Good start - hope the rest of the 'Rave' goes as well as this beginning … don't forget to rehydrate … :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on July 2, 2018
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Tags: short poetry, poetry, free verse, youth, movement

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paperwizards
paperwizards

Scotland, United Kingdom



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A Poem by paperwizards