Honest truth

Honest truth

A Poem by Patricia
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Honesty and truth are rare, but when found one of the most beautiful things that could exist. These clear moments is what is important. It's longer than my others but I kinda got into it, enjoy.

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I adore the honest
When the truth is so penetrating
You can almost touch it
Delicate and devastating 

If applicable it can be found 
In extensive noises or just a silence sound
Sometimes in throughout or in sunder
In the incidents way down under

Emotions purely crystal clear
They get refracted
As scattered as light through a lens
more unique than you'd suspected

In this range
Everything's clear
Every emotion combined with one another
And every single one connected with fear 

We are afraid to lose
Our current possesion,
What we're never going to own
progressive progression

What kills us is the hope
When beyond the truth 
In reality is the lie
Snuck and uncouth

Once considered the overall picture
A constancy is recognized
That honest truth often is
mistaken or unidentified
 
The truth might be
The only thing which stays
In solid ways
When it's let free 

© 2014 Patricia


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Sometimes the truth outweighs everything else.... The truth here is that this is an excellent writing:) honestly...
P.S: I say the truth and nothing but the truth.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to look at my art as well! I really appreciate this( also nothing but .. read more
I agree.
"The truth might be
The only thing which stays
In solid ways
When it's let free"
I liked how you used the description to give strength and purpose to your words. I like the honest and direct tone to the poetry. The truth is under-rated. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind comment. I appreciate it!
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome.
simple and true. i like this poem about the honest truth

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Well-written. I think it flows well and the words used are engaging!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and that nice comment!
sherni

4 Years Ago

Not a worry, keep it up!
Well Patricia.
I really enjoyed this piece it has a nice flow to it.
Very powerful words.

Well done.
Than you for sharing.
Angad

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Fantastic piece, after so many days I am reading something worthwhile here. There are lines which are very much powerful and can be accepted philosophically. Truth take its own course, even though buried it's very powerful and immortal. You have gotta search for it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you for nice review, I appreciate that:)
I enjoyed this piece! For some reason occasionally I got lost in the tempo. Toward the beginning you were rhyming, and I felt it got off that track a few times which tripped me up. Great concept, fantastic wording, but I would look into how to maybe rearrange the middle parts. Overall, really enjoyed it! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review, I had so many ideas but i think they just didn't fit, well I'll .. read more

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Added on November 3, 2014
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Patricia

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