Honest truth

Honesty and truth are rare, but when found one of the most beautiful things that could exist. These clear moments is what is important. It's longer than my others but I kinda got into it, enjoy.

I adore the honest

When the truth is so penetrating

You can almost touch it

Delicate and devastating 

If applicable it can be found 

In extensive noises or just a silence sound

Sometimes in throughout or in sunder

In the incidents way down under

Emotions purely crystal clear

They get refracted

As scattered as light through a lens

more unique than you'd suspected

In this range

Everything's clear

Every emotion combined with one another

And every single one connected with fear 

We are afraid to lose

Our current possesion,

What we're never going to own

progressive progression

What kills us is the hope

When beyond the truth 

In reality is the lie

Snuck and uncouth

Once considered the overall picture

A constancy is recognized

That honest truth often is

mistaken or unidentified

 

The truth might be

The only thing which stays

In solid ways

When it's let free 

Reviews

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethi..]

Sometimes the truth outweighs everything else.... The truth here is that this is an excellent writing:) honestly...
P.S: I say the truth and nothing but the truth.

[Patricia]

Thank you for taking the time to look at my art as well! I really appreciate this( also nothing but the truth haha)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"The truth might be
The only thing which stays
In solid ways
When it's let free"
I liked how you used the description to give strength and purpose to your words. I like the honest and direct tone to the poetry. The truth is under-rated. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Patricia]

Thank you for your kind comment. I appreciate it!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Evelyn]

simple and true. i like this poem about the honest truth

[Patricia]

Thank you!

[sherni]

Well-written. I think it flows well and the words used are engaging!

[Patricia]

Thank you for reading and that nice comment!

[sherni]

Not a worry, keep it up!

[Angad Waraich]

Well Patricia.
I really enjoyed this piece it has a nice flow to it.
Very powerful words.

Well done.
Than you for sharing.
Angad

[Patricia]

Thank you!

[Mayank]

Fantastic piece, after so many days I am reading something worthwhile here. There are lines which are very much powerful and can be accepted philosophically. Truth take its own course, even though buried it's very powerful and immortal. You have gotta search for it.

[Patricia]

Thank you for nice review, I appreciate that:)

[studentinthecafe]

I enjoyed this piece! For some reason occasionally I got lost in the tempo. Toward the beginning you were rhyming, and I felt it got off that track a few times which tripped me up. Great concept, fantastic wording, but I would look into how to maybe rearrange the middle parts. Overall, really enjoyed it! :)

[Patricia]

Thank you very much for the review, I had so many ideas but i think they just didn't fit, well I'll work on that:)