A Poem by Patricia

Uncovering the mind gives the possibility of an inexistent accordance. Burn the fear with the cover, let it fit and love.

Burn my bare soul
Set it on fire
Capture the fragments  
Could one desire?

The undiscovered depth
When a total does not fit
There is no access
But how can I permit?

Burn to illuminate
Burn the depth with depth
Free to expand
Unrestrained in its full breadth

Maybe only with a burnt down cover
I am free to permit
And I will discover
Because now it is possible to fit

© 2015 Patricia

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Hey my beautiful dear, your soft fingers made a little typo here in this line: "The undiscovered detphs", please forgive me for picking up this typo "detphs" off your poetry. You`re very close my heart so, as a dear, I take you inside my heart and show you what you even needed to be shown. Please replace it with this "Depth".

Anyway, This poetry`s one of my fav. indeed. And, I can easily see the vivid imagery of "Depth" through your words. The way you`ve started this poetry is what just touched my heart and allowed it to get you more close to it. Oh... you write so deep stuffs. Keep writing, Patricia.

Posted 6 Years Ago

I found this very intriguing and powerful, there are those areas where we can reach but only stopped by beliefs and fear. Your words were very true.

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your nice review! I am glad you could enjoy it.

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Added on March 12, 2015
Last Updated on May 27, 2015
Tags: Undiscovered, burn, soul, mind, depth, permission, sccess, fit, possibility, expand, freedom, breadth




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