Undiscovered

Undiscovered

A Poem by Patricia
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Uncovering the mind gives the possibility of an inexistent accordance. Burn the fear with the cover, let it fit and love.

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Burn my bare soul
Set it on fire
Capture the fragments  
Could one desire?

The undiscovered depth
When a total does not fit
There is no access
But how can I permit?

Burn to illuminate
Burn the depth with depth
Free to expand
Unrestrained in its full breadth

Maybe only with a burnt down cover
I am free to permit
And I will discover
Because now it is possible to fit

© 2015 Patricia


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Hey my beautiful dear, your soft fingers made a little typo here in this line: "The undiscovered detphs", please forgive me for picking up this typo "detphs" off your poetry. You`re very close my heart so, as a dear, I take you inside my heart and show you what you even needed to be shown. Please replace it with this "Depth".

Anyway, This poetry`s one of my fav. indeed. And, I can easily see the vivid imagery of "Depth" through your words. The way you`ve started this poetry is what just touched my heart and allowed it to get you more close to it. Oh... you write so deep stuffs. Keep writing, Patricia.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I found this very intriguing and powerful, there are those areas where we can reach but only stopped by beliefs and fear. Your words were very true.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Patricia

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your nice review! I am glad you could enjoy it.

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Tags: Undiscovered, burn, soul, mind, depth, permission, sccess, fit, possibility, expand, freedom, breadth

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Patricia
Patricia

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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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