How

How

A Poem by Patricia
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There are way to many questions you will never get an answer to.

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I thought so much about you 
And never thought you would too 
What was I suppposed to do?

Questions without a reply
A not answerable why
I am so scared to rely
How am I supposed to I get by?

As I do know now
I tried to avow
I am asking how

© 2015 Patricia


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A very cleverly written piece Patricia. Short which I like but conveys the feelings you have and the questions you have, Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Patricia

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
There is somewhat a sad tone to the poem for questions this speaker has that will never be answered. Well, not necessarily a sad tone but one that keeps me, the reader, thinking. Very nice :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Patricia

8 Years Ago

Thank you! It should sound sad, because it is. So many thing we will never know and what the person .. read more
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jb
Nice poem ....great gob!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Patricia

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
jb

8 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
beautiful.......
we do have a question or two to spare, after the moment has passed to keep us amused.........sometimes a whole lot of them......
i loved it!!!
:)
p.s. 7th line from the top: the second "I" doesn't seem to fit. just my opinion and i might be wrong.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Patricia

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I understand what you mean I myself thought about taking it out, but somehow it felt righ.. read more
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Rm
Great poem with excellent expression:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Patricia

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
great poem :) u were able to talk about questions that we all sometimes ask ourselves and never know the answer :) great job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Patricia

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)!
Justin

8 Years Ago

your welcome, keep it up :)

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Added on June 7, 2015
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Patricia

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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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