cr

there's crimes to be committed

snow is on the ground today.

footprints are everywhere

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Guilty footsteps obscured by the many more innocent?
Grabbing my tools of the trade; calling "Jimmy the Lock."
Let'd so this thing!

[...]

I felt the same way when they cut down a majestic oak at the quarry for being in the way of bulldozers

[Siddhartha]

Allegorical and eloquent.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

traces of the criminal activity...nature trespassed, a beautiful scene robbed of its innocence...

i really like your style.

[paul]

Thanks man.

[Brittany]

love it lol

[asdarkeyesclose]

'snow is on the ground today.'

almost a haiku but so much better. as if the footprints are of the thief? maybe he won't get away scot free. I enjoyed this a lot. fantastic.

[.]

:: that's a scary thought, coach... but you create the atmosphere really well with just a few words... sheer brilliance...