searching

hoping hoping hoping

for a new kind of sun.

to lite my path

searching searching searching

and only finding

hell

Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

To find a new sun you have to see it with new eyes...I like the way you use the sun in your poem, I hope you find what you are searching for.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

This must be real terrible...the pain must be so strong.....

vincent
www.esprit.aegauthorblogs.com

[emmah]

spinning spinning spinning
in silent spirals
screaming

[Ed Hart]

you need six months by the sea shore, alone

[...]

. and then one day ... just like that ... all heaven broke loose ... and the cannon full off a thousand sprinkling stars went off ... drenched ... we watched the spectacular carnival unravel ... wondering all the while ... how even we could be surprised ... usurped by our own ... and that's what we thought ... non-existent quest for sunshine ... steered towards light ... and this time ... without an effort ...

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

I really like how you make us a part of how you feel...sunny or dark :) thank you.

[Emily B]

there are hundreds, maybe thousands of suns left to find . . . maybe tomorrow will find you more fortunate in your search

[Crinkle°]

keep searching! :o)