hope walked on

hope walked on

love didn't

last

dreams expired in the night

the wind blew

unanswered

Reviews

[.]

. ohhhhh ... gosh ... my heart just split into a million pieces ... each one reflecting an expired dream ... and as i remain unanswered ... i hope that silence is not immortal ... there's much to look forward to in this universe because of your sheer genius ...

[Kerry O'Connor]

I read your poems first in serah's manuscript, and I have to say your work definitely steals the show. I look forward to read my way through all your pieces, so you'll be hearing a lot from me...

[cest la vie]

..and the unloved keep searching for love..
this is quite the beauty here Mr paul..
I find less is more and this is way more..good more..

[Sweets]

Loved the ending :)
Such a beautiful piece
Very well written :)

[em]

- my oh my!!! - a million million pieces - like serah said - echo in those million silences - there were no expiration dates on the dreams that got killed - and yet - in that dark silence - some new voices are born - that rise in new dreams - and the winds - sometimes - carry those dreams home too -
- the unlasting love - may it have an early expiration date (wonder if some holy men are listening!!) -

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Love never lasts..it seems..but hope does cause the heart lasts.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

the final two lines.. so starkly touching

[Dani]

"the wind blew
unanswered"
it always does.

great poem.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you've drawn the effigy of the thinking man sculpture heart deep in frost inside my mind with this poetic~ like an exhale with a sharp edge~another gem in brevity that elicits such a vast unfolding of imagination from your audience~

[Lilly Negoi]

from my point of view i think the last two lines are a real piece of jewelry in the context of this poem. each of them in itself and both as a whole. it may be a simple poem, but one more or less word would make it less perfect :). very nicely done!