little drops

little drops

A Poem by paul

little drops of water
make up the big
sea

little lapping waves worship
the moon

tides turn

madness boils

reality fools.

the skies hide the stars
during the day

© 2011 paul


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. the night is actually the day and the day is actually the night ... but very few people know that ... but it's tough not to be a fool ... very tough ... sometimes i wish i could be fooled ... and i could spend my life just getting fooled ... without realizing it of course ... the trouble is realizing it ... because if we do ... then we have to change ... and be more accommodating ... and feel the pain of the part of us that died every day for the rest of our lives ... indeed, madness boils ...

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Day and night.
Night and day
Dilly dally
The fight continues.

The skies indeed hide the stars
But the night
exposes them

Posted 13 Years Ago


reality fols...
love it..love your words..

Posted 13 Years Ago


it really is all illusion ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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- the pain of knowing - yes - i agree with serah - there's nothing soothing about that - the only salve - is the struggle of it all - 'the skies hide the stars during the day' - is one of the best lines i have read - ever! -

Posted 13 Years Ago


They do, they do but sometimes you just have to close your eyes and remember they are there (their?), perhaps.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. the night is actually the day and the day is actually the night ... but very few people know that ... but it's tough not to be a fool ... very tough ... sometimes i wish i could be fooled ... and i could spend my life just getting fooled ... without realizing it of course ... the trouble is realizing it ... because if we do ... then we have to change ... and be more accommodating ... and feel the pain of the part of us that died every day for the rest of our lives ... indeed, madness boils ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Reality fools :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


the sky hides the stars... I like that idea.

Posted 13 Years Ago


big things are always made of small things. the skies may hide the stars for our eyes during the day, but maybe they reveal them for others eyes in that time...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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