stars

the stars in the sky

dream dreams in the

night

everywhere madness

spreads like light.

Reviews

[FireFly]

There is something to be said for a poet who can tell a story is so few lines. Very well done, I loved this!

[h d e rushin]

the last two lines have quite a kick like something wild
in a canvas bag.
madness is being spread like an out of control virus...good read. hder

[flyingdreams]

Don't know why, but i loved this poem...

[dontwakeme]

This makes so much sense.

[Elizabeth]

This makes me smile... and brings me comfort. The bit about the stars dreaming, anyway. The madness - ah, inevitable, I am afraid. xo

[Ms. Gruye]

everywhere madness
spreads like light

those are some hefty last lines. The fact that they follow with a light hearted, hopeful image of stars twinkling away in their sleep made me enjoy this piece very much. Your style is the opposite of sparse, only with far less words. well done and viva la

[Stella]

I really like this poem! It was short and sweet which suited your poem.

[Emily B]

always better to spread light

than darkness

[lostboy]

do they ever see the light?

[Desert Dreamer]

The stars are dreaming...and the light spreads madness...oh, this one is deep, thank you for the wonderful metaphor.