shivers

shivers

A Poem by pdumont1
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somehow these abrasive, sandy words were cast in such a way that they became a glass window into my own soul...

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these shivers run deep
quivering into madness
impossible to sleep
scared of dreams filled with truth and sadness
these shivers run deep
sweat pours non stop
slipping down a slope so steep
quickly descending from the top
these shivers run deep
sunny rays blind
into the darkness i still creep
depression lingers and yet i dont mind
These shivers run deep
The silence made me numb 
Salvation is within a quick leap
To my demise will I eventually succumb? 
the shivers are no more
this terror has ceased
these words have become a realistic door.

© 2013 pdumont1


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pdumont1
please leave insight or thoughts. my first piece in a long time and i want to head in the right direction

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Once you start writing again it seems that it all comes back to you. I love repetition in poetry, it allows all the other text to really soak in. Good job!




Posted 6 Years Ago


Sorry that you cowerd on the edge of madness
in a constant state of shaking with profuse
night sweats. Eventually as you write, the palsy
ceased and you find freedom to resume your normal
life.
We have missed you---- I have particularly .
Thank you for this exciting poem---- I hope you willl
write much more----- soon.
----- Eagle Cruagh


Posted 6 Years Ago


very very good. strong use of words, your emotions shine through... very good for a comeback piece

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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writing was a big part of my life many years ago but i let it slip away. hoping now to kick start my creative side and maybe explore new aspects of my mind and more..

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