A Poem by pdumont1

somehow these abrasive, sandy words were cast in such a way that they became a glass window into my own soul...

these shivers run deep
quivering into madness
impossible to sleep
scared of dreams filled with truth and sadness
these shivers run deep
sweat pours non stop
slipping down a slope so steep
quickly descending from the top
these shivers run deep
sunny rays blind
into the darkness i still creep
depression lingers and yet i dont mind
These shivers run deep
The silence made me numb 
Salvation is within a quick leap
To my demise will I eventually succumb? 
the shivers are no more
this terror has ceased
these words have become a realistic door.

© 2013 pdumont1

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Author's Note

please leave insight or thoughts. my first piece in a long time and i want to head in the right direction

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Once you start writing again it seems that it all comes back to you. I love repetition in poetry, it allows all the other text to really soak in. Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Sorry that you cowerd on the edge of madness
in a constant state of shaking with profuse
night sweats. Eventually as you write, the palsy
ceased and you find freedom to resume your normal
We have missed you---- I have particularly .
Thank you for this exciting poem---- I hope you willl
write much more----- soon.
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 6 Years Ago

very very good. strong use of words, your emotions shine through... very good for a comeback piece

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 22, 2013
Last Updated on April 22, 2013




writing was a big part of my life many years ago but i let it slip away. hoping now to kick start my creative side and maybe explore new aspects of my mind and more..