writers block

writers block

A Poem by pdumont1

"death, destruction, hurt"
no, thats not right
the next line i have no idea what to insert.

"love, affection,feelings of great!"
s**t, that isnt right.
i have no feelings that can relate

"a sound, a noise, a great big Thud!"
F**K! I GIVE UP!
these thoughts are getting backed up like a historic flood

"nothing, negative, blank"
thats more like it
so many thoughts and feelings...

© 2013 pdumont1


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Sometimes words on paper are just enough. While grammar, punctuation and prose do matter. I'm not really one of those people. I like it. It's like a big ugly hammer with character. It bashes it's way into a poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


very good... this is a perfect description of how most of the better poems get made... my own personal way is fighting with the thoughts in my head until i beat them into submission... then they cooperate and work with me in ways i couldnt even begin to do alone... sometimes our thoughts are our greatest allies... other times our worst enemies

Posted 6 Years Ago



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writing was a big part of my life many years ago but i let it slip away. hoping now to kick start my creative side and maybe explore new aspects of my mind and more..

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A Poem by pdumont1