writers block

"death, destruction, hurt"

no, thats not right

the next line i have no idea what to insert.

"love, affection,feelings of great!"

s**t, that isnt right.

i have no feelings that can relate

"a sound, a noise, a great big Thud!"

F**K! I GIVE UP!

these thoughts are getting backed up like a historic flood

"nothing, negative, blank"

thats more like it

so many thoughts and feelings...

Reviews

[Notsoloud]

Sometimes words on paper are just enough. While grammar, punctuation and prose do matter. I'm not really one of those people. I like it. It's like a big ugly hammer with character. It bashes it's way into a poem.

[Caitlynn Cusick]

very good... this is a perfect description of how most of the better poems get made... my own personal way is fighting with the thoughts in my head until i beat them into submission... then they cooperate and work with me in ways i couldnt even begin to do alone... sometimes our thoughts are our greatest allies... other times our worst enemies