Broken

Broken

A Poem by BookIt1357
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Something straight from the heart. This goes out to Robert, my first heartbreak.

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I wonder, I think,
“What could I have done?”
To keep you, to hold you,
So you wouldn’t run.
Could I have prevented
What we have become?

You say “Let’s be friends”
But I can’t handle that.
There’s no way for you
To see past the mask.
I didn’t know anyone
Could hurt me like that.

My perception of you
Will forever be marred.
With one simple message
That hit me so hard.
I still don’t believe
How you tore me apart.

© 2011 BookIt1357


Author's Note

BookIt1357
I'm considering switching the last two parts around. Opinions?

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ouch.everyones lost someone they like maybe even love,and it hurts..this is one of those poems that capture it perfectly

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's ok :)

I really love it whenever it's this raw. Emotions flow like a raging river.
I know you can still go deeper. Delve in to that pain you are keeping.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwwww! I can feel the strong, intense emotions in this piece. It also flows together well. A very relatable piece. Great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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