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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Kiss Me in the Rain

Kiss Me in the Rain

A Poem by Kait
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I have always wanted a kiss in the rain. It is the total perfect cliche moment and I, personally, think of cliche as romantic. But on the same note I have never been kissed in the rain because I want that moment to be special so I reserve it for my one tr

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Your eyes whisper secrets you will never say aloud.
Your arms bring with them security so that I am forever bound,
to you and to this love so true.
Which leads me to a favor from you.
I want a kiss in the rain, you decide how.
Make is simple or make is cliche,
either way, it will be a sentimental day.
Kiss me in the rain.
To wash away the hurt and pain.
To erase everything, making it new and pure.
Then with your support I will endure
until we are free to start on our own
a life of fairytales not written in stone.
What makes us different is what sets us apart
from all the questions that were raised in the start.
My wish I have kept silent up until now.
All for one reason; go on and take a bow,
because you are my perfect one, my other half in this world so mundane.
Kiss me in the rain!

© 2009 Kait


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this is kinda different from your earlier writing but its to be expected. I dont know what cliche means but being kissed in the rain is very romantic. I still havent done this but now I want to try it out. I hope it feels as great as you described it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


WOW! I'm very excited! None of my writings have been reviewed! Thank you! and YES I have seen the Notebook. A true classic and one of the most amazing love tales. I just knew that something as cliche and romantic as a kiss in the rain would stick in your memory. Thank you for telling me. It makes me stand behind my one true love thing even more.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love the title to this poem. Being kissed in the rain is very romantic indeed. I was fortunate enough to experience this once in my life and that memory will reside in my heart & mind forever. For some reason this piece reminded me of the movie "The Notebook", have you seen it? It's a great movie, and this is a great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


i like the rhythm. very appealing to the story. feels intense.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 31, 2009
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Kait
Kait

Gurdon, AR



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