neck thirsty vampire.

neck thirsty vampire.

A Poem by M. Elizabeth.
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Inspired by all the vampire stories about.

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Thirst.          

 

looking at their neck,

I can practically see their sweet blood through their thin, pale, light skin.

 

I was so ready and so tempted to just lunge forward and sink in my teeth.

My throat was on fire just thinking about it..

I closed my eyes tight and held my breath, but..  considering i didn't have much to focus on, my ears picked up their heart beat. The fire in my throat was wild, stubborn and excited, I tried my best to ignore the pain in the back of my throat and the obsessive heart beat in the back of my mind.

 

The beat of their heart was pulling me closer and draining my thoughts.

 

Without hesitation or control i leaped forward and put out the unbearable fire.

 

The heart beat disapeared along with my thirst.

 

I was selfish.. but my throat tingled with satisfaction.

 

 

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© 2010 M. Elizabeth.


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I like it :))

Posted 13 Years Ago


A few spelling mistakes, but it's still good.
Well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ooo I like it =^-^= Especially how it ends.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I don't see that much writing from this point of view. I like it, but I think you should choose a gender for the victim.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 19, 2010
Last Updated on July 20, 2010
Tags: vampire, blood

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M. Elizabeth.
M. Elizabeth.

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loove writting, not really sure if i'm good at it but atleast I enjoy it. I only really write short stories but I don't know maybe i'll write a book :) All friend requests appreciated :) All cri.. more..

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