.5. words.

.5. words.

A Poem by M. Elizabeth.
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wrote this for the 5 word poem competition :)

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5 words.

 

 

cry

scream

run

 

stop

.

breathing.

© 2010 M. Elizabeth.


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M. Elizabeth.
wrote this for the 5 word poem competition :)

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sharp~ brings a whole rush of emotions in quick beat!~

Posted 13 Years Ago
mine would have ended with GASPING! hahaha
Scary movies do all those things ...
and the girl always falls down, or the car won't start.. lol



Posted 13 Years Ago
For it to only be five words, you most definitely got the poem across! Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago
That's awesome, especially with the picture you added to it. Only 5 words, but it says a lot!

Posted 13 Years Ago
Great work! I am a young writer too! Wanna be friends?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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M. Elizabeth.
M. Elizabeth.

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loove writting, not really sure if i'm good at it but atleast I enjoy it. I only really write short stories but I don't know maybe i'll write a book :) All friend requests appreciated :) All cri.. more..

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