But a Wish is But a Wish

But a Wish is But a Wish

A Poem by peculiar
"

Delusion or Reality, take your pick.

"

Water water water

This is all I can mutter,

For thirst unquenched my mind starts to falter

Through this scorching desert as we blunder,

 

From my side comes a triumphant cry,

Given our state I wonder why

For there he says does the water lie,

From his point of direction I assume close by

 

My sudden relief dissolves in what I cannot see,

Is his a mirage or can it be,

I know the answer deep inside of me

But In denial I wish to be,

Living in his salvation fantasy

 

But a wish is but a wish

Though true it would be bliss,

I must open my eyes to see I never fall amiss

As I venture out and find the water beneath the abyss

For the truth is an uncharted and faceless kiss.

 

 

© 2014 peculiar


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peculiar
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Liked this write. The theme flows through the piece nicely. Well written. Welcome to wc

Posted 10 Years Ago


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peculiar

10 Years Ago

Thank you! Glad to be here hehe

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Tags: religion, life, belief, wishes, hopes, bliss, denial, doubt, question, truth, philosophy, being, awareness, realization, insight, naive, awakening, acceptance, reality, fantasy, salvation, mirage

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