Unconditional

Unconditional

A Book by Penny Lusk


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© 2008 Penny Lusk


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enjambment makes a beat ... we dance is music ...

Music begins to atrophy when it departs too far from the dance... poetry begins to atrophy when it gets too far from music.
Ezra Pound

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is wonderful. i love the comparison between a poem and your relationship and love for one another. great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice flow, very romantic and clever comparisons....I enjoyed this very much

Posted 12 Years Ago


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very good penny. flowing and emotional.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a perfect combination these two individuals make Penny Lusk, very sweet dance too. Loved it. Smiling at you, Tai

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wonderful. I really like the flow and the rhyme. The way you compare a poem to a love and a love to a dance creates a nice feeling that I can appreciate. This poem is like a very smooth morning breeze. Easy in, easy out. Very enjoyable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I enjoy writing, but it seems things only come when I am down. I have tried poetry.com and yet it seems that I go no where. I have wished upon a star and where there are those that have landed the.. more..

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