Re-living innocence

Re-living innocence

A Poem by penless writer

We don’t appreciate innocence and childhood

Till we are part of cruel and grownup world

 

We hope to relive our childhood

Through the pure hearts of our rebelling children

 

We dream about re-living the childhood once more

Send our kids to their adult life and

Pull them back to appreciate their innocence

 

But every dream that touches reality

Just turns impure

Every child who reaches adulthood

Can never return to being pure

 

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© 2011 penless writer


Author's Note

penless writer
Inspired by Infinite from PoppySilver
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/PoppySilver/789622/

Post corrections, if u see any :)

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They say we can never return home.. and in some ways this is so true.. your words reflect this deeply. Growing up seems to mean leaving behind.. the innocence.. the childhood dances... May we still let those memories linger and help us walk with joy through the dark shadows that haunt us in our adult years.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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this poem is so beautiful and what it says is amzing keep writing !:) you are awesome :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You may be new here, but your writing is amazing. Every word in this holds such an excellent and beautiful meaning. Wonderful love. (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The message hidden inside this piece is beautiful and wonderful. Everything this poem said is so true.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a fantastic piece. it hits, head on, the sad truth of the end of childhood.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love This

Posted 9 Years Ago


PoppySilver is awesome. This poem is awesome. Ergo, you both are awesome XD

But such a true message, being a mother myself its a sad truth that this poem expresses.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

They say we can never return home.. and in some ways this is so true.. your words reflect this deeply. Growing up seems to mean leaving behind.. the innocence.. the childhood dances... May we still let those memories linger and help us walk with joy through the dark shadows that haunt us in our adult years.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is great truth in these words. I thought it flowed very well and spoke of a fantastic point in the writing as well. I liked this poem very much.
Keep on writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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