Miles and Hopes

Miles and Hopes

A Poem by penless writer
"

Hope to meet you soon.

"

Every increasing mile between us

Only thrusts my hope to be yours soon

 

Every letter we exchange

Only reduces the miles between us

 

Every mile we conquer

Only makes, soon: sooner and hope: Certainty

 

© 2011 penless writer


Author's Note

penless writer
Letter = is a single letter of a word. Medium be the IM, email or the ever loved conventional mail… A letter bridges hearts.

Feel free to correct me :)

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Posted 9 Years Ago


I like it the way it is...that wonderful excitement of soon meeting that special someone. Hope is what keeps us going.

Posted 9 Years Ago


beautifully explained,nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".


Posted 9 Years Ago


nice work i like it

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sweet.
You just said so much in a bunch of lines!
Nah, I don't think it needs correction, the poem is actually pretty perfect :)

Thanks for the review.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautifully written! Personal pronouns such as 'us' really gives it an intimate quality. It feels like you've let us into your mind. Thank you for sharing! It's short but sweet and emotion-packed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Short but packs emotion! Well done! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This honestly brought tears to my eyes. Very short, yet holds such a strong emotion. I thank you for sharing this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you did a good job on this poem. It's short and sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 27, 2011
Last Updated on September 27, 2011
Tags: Hope, love, heart, miles

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penless writer

India



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I believe in life, love and language. I am learning to live. I am getting better at love. I love to live my life writing. more..

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