Senryu: Finding our real self in our self

Senryu: Finding our real self in our self

A Poem by zennedpen
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Our real self lives within us, but we should let it live, rather than try to dig it into our own outer presence. We just muddy the true picture by such digging.

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Senryu: Our real self

I dug deep, so deep.
What was unearthed in myself?
Twas nothing on Earth!

Photo Credit: The photos used in this article were all sourced from the free media site, pixabay.com

© 2020 zennedpen


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Very strong senryu here.
There is a spirituality we connect with that has nothing to do with material possessions...
it is love, friendship, peace within...
we often look in the wrong place for what can really comfort us.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zennedpen

3 Years Ago

Thanks. I also think that true spirituality must be connected to from our non-material side, from ou.. read more

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Added on November 23, 2020
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zennedpen
zennedpen

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia



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