Lunar Mirror

Lunar Mirror

A Poem by Penulis Kecil

This week my poetry group experimented with shape poetry, and we were challenged to write one about the moon.

Waves slip:
silver dependability
obscures tidal distortion
and children, heavy with sleep
drowse fitfully, chasing hopes
disguised as dreams where
astronauts explore and
parents love you:
no conditions.

© 2012 Penulis Kecil

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Penulis Kecil
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I like the poem alot and the shape of it...Unique...:).................

Posted 5 Years Ago

57 not one comment? no unconditional love ? wake up cafe.... odd or silly this girl is awake are you ?

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on December 6, 2012
Last Updated on December 6, 2012
Tags: moon, shape, form


Penulis Kecil
Penulis Kecil

Caboolture, Australia

I'm a 29 year old Australian woman who has, like most people, experienced a number of things in life. I think I'm pretty friendly, if a little odd and silly. When I'm not writing, I enjoy other cre.. more..