Dylan's Perspective

Dylan's Perspective

A Poem by Penulis Kecil
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Writing about emotions, a support worker mentioned that the pet store makes his "wallet sore" - I got carried away into this silly little piece.

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Thursday again and my tired feet drag:
today has meaning I can't ignore.
We're headed again to that damn place,
your favourite place, the bloody pet store.

We'll go right in and you'll stare away,
those sad blue eyes will beg and plead;
I know I'll end up saying yes,
although it makes my poor wallet bleed!

© 2012 Penulis Kecil


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Penulis Kecil
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A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ha! i was there yesterday, they were selling iams with turkey but they were small pieces not large so i left it our dog just had her birthday and my husband booked a mobile grooming parlour to come around. They plugged into our electric and gave her a wash and blow dry, cut her claws and brushed her teeth. Then my husband proceeded to cook her a steak (he is so soft about her!). thank you for making me smile!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Penulis Kecil
Penulis Kecil

Caboolture, Australia



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I'm a 29 year old Australian woman who has, like most people, experienced a number of things in life. I think I'm pretty friendly, if a little odd and silly. When I'm not writing, I enjoy other cre.. more..

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