My Final Winter!!

My Final Winter!!

A Poem by The Unknown Rose

for those who dont understand this its about how the last thing i see in a place of misery something so pure and beautiful but its ruined by the hatred that drives some to the ledge


The sun sets and the stars Brighten


A child's cry


A lover's smile


A laugh that brings you Light


What brings us DARKNESS?


A silver blade and crimson blood


A child's laughter




A beating in my breasts


A cold touch shaking then still




White and Pure


the last of the world i see


But ruined the.....the.....crims.......



© 2011 The Unknown Rose

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The Unknown Rose,

Interesting indeed... Leaves us pondering on so much.

An edge indeed - amazing, is this is even a word to use... To think with so much beauty in this world and yet it is wiped away by so much pain.

Thank you for the read.

Keep on writing

Have a Wonderful Day


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Posted 8 Years Ago

Huh, very interesting. I think it's really well written, and very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This was a beautiful write. I felt a deeper meaning to it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on October 25, 2011
Last Updated on October 25, 2011


The Unknown Rose
The Unknown Rose

Madera, CA

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