My Final Winter!!

My Final Winter!!

A Poem by The Unknown Rose
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for those who dont understand this its about how the last thing i see in a place of misery something so pure and beautiful but its ruined by the hatred that drives some to the ledge

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The sun sets and the stars Brighten

 

A child's cry

 

A lover's smile

 

A laugh that brings you Light

 

What brings us DARKNESS?

 

A silver blade and crimson blood

 

A child's laughter

 

A HURTFUL touch

 

A beating in my breasts

 

A cold touch shaking then still

 

Snowfalls

 

White and Pure

 

the last of the world i see

 

But ruined the.....the.....crims.......

 

THE END

© 2011 The Unknown Rose


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The Unknown Rose,

Interesting indeed... Leaves us pondering on so much.

An edge indeed - amazing, is this is even a word to use... To think with so much beauty in this world and yet it is wiped away by so much pain.

Thank you for the read.

Keep on writing

Have a Wonderful Day

Legacy

P.S.
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Posted 8 Years Ago


Huh, very interesting. I think it's really well written, and very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was a beautiful write. I felt a deeper meaning to it.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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The Unknown Rose
The Unknown Rose

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