Passion

Written 2004

I dream of passion.  The real kind.  The kind that doesn't leave until your last breath fades into the wind.  I dream of the kind of passion you can feel in your toes, in your stomach, the kind that quivers on your lips.  I dream of passion a look across the room can ignite.  I want the kind that pours out of your body and onto his.  I want the kind of passion I can trace in his eyes.  I want the passion I can't live without.

Author's Note

It's wonderful to look back and realize that something you wanted so many years ago... you now have.
Thank you [11.05.2009]

Reviews

[None]

You have a beautiful passion for passion! Never settle for second best. You put it in your mind; that is what you desire and you will obtain it! You may have already achieved this by the time you wrote the poem. Your poem is from the heart and well written as well. Your words: "I want the kind of passion I can trace in his eyes" really hit me tenderly. This is lovely.

[Antonio Valentino]

Wonderful Melissa, this is such an integral part of what it means to be human. Your words defied that so very well.

Don't ever be any different!
Antono

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Passion DEFINED!!!! Why do so many people agree, yet can't seem to find it in one another?
Great write!

[Emily B]

oh, me too. I know it must exist. Too many have sought the wild heat. Too many have spilled words on page describing the passion they have found. We will find it. You and I. This is a truly wonderful write.

[poetic soul]

powerful words........indeed passionate......loved it thoroughly, but these lines were amazing:

I dream of passion a look across the room can ignite.

and

I want the kind of passion I can trace in his eyes.

Regards,
Poetic Soul

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Powerfully heartfelt.

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Your verbal skills are impressive. Your words go far to describe this passion that you seek. I will not be the one to tell you that anything that burns that hot must always 'flame out'. Okay, so maybe I just did tell you. But do not let that kill your words. They are high-reaching, they are like the expert strokes on a verbal Picasso.

[Brandon]

Another nice piece. Great job.

[Doctor Deathstab]

An excellent description of what you want. Many people are inarticulate when it comes to describing such a feeling.

[Arthur Henn]

This is the first I have read of you writing, very well written. Thank you for sharing.

This is a wonderful line.

I dream of passion a look across the room can ignite.

Art

[Wildecat]

An excellent write, I think everyone would like that kind of passion.