[Contest] Weekly Haiku: Christmas Regret

[Contest] Weekly Haiku: Christmas Regret

A Poem by Melissa

“Sorry,” you told me,

“didn't get you a present.”

Oops. Merry Christmas.

© 2009 Melissa


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hah ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


:) Nice one. Though i am myself not qualified to review a haiku... its pleasing nonetheless. Have fun :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael,
I believe this is a haiku. Haikus have evolved since their time in Japan, so they don't always have to deal with nature. What defines a haiku is solely the syllable structure.

This one is fun and definitely should have won the Christmas haiku contest Mel.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha, I like it!
Short, sweet, funny.
Kudos!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this isn't haiku, it just has the same syllable structure. but it is funny and capturing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 20, 2008
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