the you within you

the you within you

A Poem by Peter H
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i felt like simply writing a simple poem :)

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deep within you 
there  is a balance that makes you  ,"you".
don't give up on finding yourself within "yourself"
scream to the anti you that "this is not you!"

eradicate the malevolent you 
that seeks to the destroy the benevolent you
stand up and fight the ,"anti yous",  for that is 
the only way to find the you within "you".

© 2013 Peter H


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Peter H
hmmmmmm , review away :)

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Interesting write and alot of wisdom in it...Rose

Posted 8 Years Ago


Inspiring one, Peter. Short but the lesson is there: finding oneself.

Well, I also believe in Johari's Windows: (1) I know others know, (2) I know, others don't know, (3) I don't know, others know, (4) I don't know, others don't know. Your poem, perhaps included in the 3rd or 4th windows wherein some things about yourself is unknown to you. Sometimes we need others to reveal and/or find who we are in this world.

Great!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Peter H

8 Years Ago

insightfuli will research thisthank you dhaye
Interesting piece here Peter! I love it. Nicely worded! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Peter H

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
Deep, beautiful advice. I hope the intended heard this, I certainly did.

Nice piece, PH

Posted 8 Years Ago


Peter H

8 Years Ago

thank you diego :)
Conflict between ego and spirit. Good read and write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Peter H

8 Years Ago

thank you brandon :)
Short and sweet and far from emotionless. I suppose the only word I can use is brave? Although I don't even see that as the right word, but hopefully you know what I'm trying to say, since my brain isn't functioning correctly this evening. You found a way to put into words what many say or wish to say, yet you do it in a poem and it's smooth on the eyes, meaningful on the mind and the heart and puts a smile on my face. Love it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Peter H

8 Years Ago

thank you very much julez :)
That's some sage advice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Peter H

8 Years Ago

thank you bro
sensing some inner conflict and personal turmoil here. this touches deeply and resonates with strong emotion. well penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Peter H

8 Years Ago

quinfin i thank you again your reviews are always astute and insightful :)
quinfinn

8 Years Ago

welcome!
Another sage piece of writing Peter. Reads well and has a clear message.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Peter H

8 Years Ago

thank you very much arch angel gabriel :) i appreciate the review :)
Awesome write... this speaks to the duality in every reader. My intrigue of heros and villains, causes me to contemplate this very subject. Very well done! One for my library.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Peter H

8 Years Ago

thank you very much dear friend :)

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Peter H

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hey nice to meet you all . i'm peter i'm just a boy , i'm from guyana .i just wanted a place to share the profound part's of my thoughts more..

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