Lost At Sea

Why does the sun rise?

The lively shark quietly pulls me down under to a deep abyss.

Shanty shores aggravated by the upset core of endless waves.

Never command a sea.

It’ll surely command you,

With the wrath of tides and monsters down deep.

The breeze whips like a cold backlash.

Courage is an old ship,

As the SS Conquest proudly ventures out.

The frantic crew comes together for fortune and fame,

We came as one

But return apart

Author's Note

please ignore format, grammatical error, etc

Reviews

[Christopher.Holmberg]

This is nice work

"We came as one
But return apart"

I like that! 10/10

[cfix]

I enjoyed this well written piece. Well written!

[Sarah Jane]

I like this:) "the lively shark pulls me deep under the deep abyss"