Blown Away

Blown Away

A Poem by Phalguni Rao
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A haiku on having hope in love.

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Love blew me away.
I lay there trampled upon, till
It picked me up again.

© 2013 Phalguni Rao


Author's Note

Phalguni Rao
It is my first haiku. Feedback of any sort is very much welcome!

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cute !!!! .... i read it to some of my friends ...
we all loved it !!!
great work !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Phalguni Rao

8 Years Ago

that is so sweet! thank you :)
Lovely work ! ( :
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Posted 8 Years Ago


Phalguni Rao

8 Years Ago

thank you!
Renée

8 Years Ago

your welcome ( :
Its amazing , simple and beautifil. Nicely pen'd.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Phalguni Rao

8 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words :)
So beautiful! I loved it! Great Job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Phalguni Rao

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot! :D
Your Haiku sort of ignites a little hope inside a broken heart, assures that it is never really over. It's sweet and romantic and i really enjoyed reading it:-):-):-D.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Phalguni Rao

8 Years Ago

That was the intention, glad you like it. Thanks! :D
Really nice..it touched my heart :)
Awesome :)

Keep writing!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Phalguni Rao

8 Years Ago

thanks! :D
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

you are welcome :)

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Added on July 27, 2013
Last Updated on July 27, 2013
Tags: love, hope

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Phalguni Rao
Phalguni Rao

Bangalore, India



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