Wrestling Words

Wrestling Words

A Poem by pheasant

Crafting a sequence
Cast in a thought

Opening avenues
Well to be caught

In a puzzling place
Outside of space

Where no simple task is left undone
We reach for the last of the castle we've begun

© 2011 pheasant


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A magical poem of sort- powerful and true.

Chloe

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Words have power, often creating new images, they are like magic at times.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm , very interesting .... that is indeed a new way to look at writing , and a nice read as well , which , given the odd topic , is an added nicety .. good job , I like it .

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The expression "less is more" comes to mind with your work. You seem to be good at getting your point across with a small amount of words.

Interesting word choice, I found myself reading things over several times.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Smooth and clean, good title.
keep on rollin

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 10, 2011
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Santa Rosa, CA



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