Judgement day

Judgement day

A Poem by nigrum homonculus
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something i made out of boredom. i left out the ending so you're imagination could finish it. idk if that was a good idea. ALSO it helps a lot if you play the music while reading.

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God’s ipod has been stolen

He’s pissed, he’s raging

He’s out for some blood.

He’s without his favourite tunes

Rocking out to the sound of silence.

Doing Air guitar without the riffs

How is he going to head bang on the mountain peaks of heaven?

Shred with almighty grace?

This don’t look good.

Satan got some explaining to do.

Messing with possessions.

He’s smug, he isn’t scared

He did this with reckless intent

Fire in his eyes

Revenge on his mind

He wants a fight

He wants to prove something

The past can’t be rewritten

So he wants to mess with the future

And the big man upstairs has reached the basement

Asking, demanding what is rightfully his

And with that spit in the face…

All hell will break loose. 

© 2012 nigrum homonculus


Author's Note

nigrum homonculus
i left the ending out so your imagination could finish it....was that a good idea?

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When God is described with human characteristics I always picture a Zeus type diety & satan as his brother Hades. Great poem...

Posted 11 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

11 Years Ago

yeah i was thinking of doing it like that but then it would seem out of place about zeus with an ipo.. read more
This was pretty darn cool! My imagination is rolling right now aswell good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

11 Years Ago

thanks bro!
Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Would it be alright with you if I made my version of the ending and posted it?
nigrum homonculus

11 Years Ago

SURE! go for it! send me an RR when you're finished

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Added on July 28, 2012
Last Updated on July 28, 2012
Tags: god, satan, epic battle.

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nigrum homonculus
nigrum homonculus

london, surrey, United Kingdom



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i have been away from this place for.....lord knows, something like 3-4 years? so i guess all the things i have experienced in that time have to come out somehow you know? so here we are. you're readi.. more..

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