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raised me right

raised me right

A Poem by nigrum homonculus
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kinda inspired by Boiler by limp bizkit. idk what this is about exactly. title courtesy of CAF/Shimmerbliss

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You made me go through this alone

Maybe you could of came with me

you weren’t scared for me.

i had to suffer independently.

You claimed you raised me right


BUT


Never taught me wrong from right

I learned all that overnight

And now the phoenix’s taking flight.


Like the sun rise

It’s a new beginning

These wounds are healing

What’s done is done….

There’s nothing here

That’s worth regretting

So thank you

For teaching

that I was

No weakling

 

Neglection

Only strengthened me.

© 2012 nigrum homonculus


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Ooooooooh [email protected]@@@@m bro! Now this I can relate to! My fav line is when you say "and now the phoenixes taking flight" I love it because when I move out ill be driving a trans am with a phoenix decal on the hood, and that's not the only reason I relate to this though. amazing..... name...... hmm...... loner child? No..... uh..... ill think of something and message you bro! But great poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

8 Years Ago

thanks again harley! glad you could relate to it bro. really appreciate this review
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Welcome man!
I really like this. I flows so well and comes through with strength. Your references to "raised me right" and "never taught me" lead me to believe it is be a parent/ child issue. If that is so (or not) it has a lot of meaning and is so well done. As for title, I am leaning toward your word "Neglection" or possibly "Raised Me Right" something like that....you'll know. Love your writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

8 Years Ago

thank you again. yeah it is about some childhood and parenting issues. hmmm i actually like them sug.. read more
Shimmerbliss/CAF

8 Years Ago

Your welcome. I enjoyed reading it!
Shimmerbliss/CAF

8 Years Ago

Love the title! It's a great poem.

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Added on August 2, 2012
Last Updated on August 3, 2012
Tags: rising, learning, strength

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nigrum homonculus
nigrum homonculus

london, surrey, United Kingdom



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i have been away from this place for.....lord knows, something like 3-4 years? so i guess all the things i have experienced in that time have to come out somehow you know? so here we are. you're readi.. more..

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