words to an ex

words to an ex

A Poem by nigrum homonculus
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erm...ya these weren't the exact words i said to her but along the lines. probably the last in the line of angry poems i have been making lately

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Your salty tears are overrated

Crying me an ocean

B***h you made your bed

Now you have to lie in it.

 

You wished that I was dead

 

I tried to be a nun

Tried to block you, forget you.

Now I’m leaving you

no lie

Your sweaty s****y antics is a genesis to your demise

A relationship?

More like relationshit!

So get off the floor and stop throwing a fit. 

© 2012 nigrum homonculus


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Good break up from a psycho b***h poem. I had a couple of those. I like the words "Sweaty S****y." She sounds like fun

Posted 8 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

8 Years Ago

ah she wasn't psycho.....ok she cried over me getting call of duty black ops but that's more clingy... read more
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Hey I think you told me about her. Never try and take a mans games or sports away. Its a no no no ma.. read more
nigrum homonculus

8 Years Ago

haha yeah i did. see i don't think she'll ever learn that as everything has to be about her lol.
Quite a cruel way to treat a past lover, hehe . . . If I were to read only the first stanza (which I have reread at least thrice), it would almost be as if you were death and you were coming to claim the soul of a person who attempted suicide, but thought differently after they hung from the noose or overdosed on pills or perhaps slit their wrists.

Posted 8 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

8 Years Ago

DAAAAMN! you're imagination is something tai! i'm actually honoured you added this to your favourite.. read more
Tai Ryens

8 Years Ago

I have been told, hehe. It isnt you who should be honored, but rather I for having the ability to r.. read more
Hahahha ah amen! Good job. Some gals are just like that (no offense ladies, I said some not all) and I bet I would be funny if you actually did

Posted 8 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

8 Years Ago

haha yeah man. if i did what? an you still up for that halo thing?
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

If you said that to her, and yeah I'm waiting to see if you have any thoughts on it
nigrum homonculus

8 Years Ago

i said the relationship relationshit line and you made your bed blah blah blah. ah oki i'll pm you
Relationshit! Love it!! She sounds like dead weight.. Good to cut her loose. :) nice!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

8 Years Ago

haha she really was. thanks for reading!

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Added on August 3, 2012
Last Updated on August 3, 2012
Tags: ex, past, closure

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nigrum homonculus
nigrum homonculus

london, surrey, United Kingdom



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i have been away from this place for.....lord knows, something like 3-4 years? so i guess all the things i have experienced in that time have to come out somehow you know? so here we are. you're readi.. more..

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