blasphemous love

basically. i had an idea, i typed it up. but i kinda wanted to get this message across aswell. god doesn't hate gays. humans do. inspired by a song called rapture

in the life of a lonely heart

lingered forbidden love

same sex fantasy and wet dreams,

deep inside this open mind

stuck in a pantomime

with a strict religious family

 

never drop the bomb on them

never reveal to them

the "dark" secrets that evade them

keep it all to yourself

their faith will put you through hell

but the eyes in the sky will never stalk you.

 

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

this is so interesting and addresses the sad, emotionally torn, ostrisisation ( excuse my spelling) of gay people from traditional or religious backgrounds
such good writing

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

I really like the message of this poem. c:

[That_Girl]

The last two lines are brilliant.

[Michael G.]

I really like the honest thought you are conveying here, Phil. Perhaps it is better for the family to never know, thus making it easier to live around them. And if you have a strong enough personality to pull that off, then you could probably survive being stuck in the closet.
Is honesty always the best policy?
Well done.

[Baby Ricochet]

Don't homophobes know if it weren't for the gay boy's we wouldn't have tasteful wallpaper? That's ricochet's way of saying homophobes aren't thinking it through. I like pretty girls in pretty cloths and those pretty cloths, along with her make up style and shoes were designed by gay dudes. Homophobes don't think about that. Some of the greatest art work ever created, gay dudes, some of the best literature, gay dudes, just about all fashion, theater, the creative arts, all gay dudes. We straight people owe gay dudes some serious props