Storm

Storm

A Poem by The Philosopher's Notebook
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A Haiku about the a very depressing day.

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In the darkest days,

When clouds fall out from the sky,

Heaven starts to cry.

 

© 2008 The Philosopher's Notebook


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I love this so greatly expressed. HUGSxxxAnne

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww, this was sad sweet and I wish I could be this clever with my writings ^-^
I hope to read more from you
~Brittany

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice haiku. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:( this was sad but sweet

just one small error: clouds not cluods


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Keith, 19 yrs old from Cromwell, Connecticut... Likes to read books, play the flute, sing, compose sonnets and write essays (in short, artistic and creative)... Friendly and sweet... .. more..

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