Summer Storm

Summer Storm

A Poem by Zephyr
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Kind of self-explanatory, don't you think?

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Fire dances in the lightning as it crackles to the ground, followed by a bass epilogue of thunder. The sky trembles with the wild beauty, the moon and stars fleeing to calmer skies as the treachourously dark, downy clouds obscure the last of the indigo night.

 

As the rain starts to come down, drowning out the world, I can’t resist stepping outside.

© 2008 Zephyr


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Love it.....
Rain is an obsession of mine at times

Great write

blesssssssssssssss

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written.
You really bring out the beauty in a storm.
I loved the detail.
Great write : )

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ever seen an Irish rainshower? Nomally strikes hard when youve no coat or cap!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ahh yes.
There is something most appealing about 'bad weather'
I prefer thunder storms to sunshine ... but I am not normal :p

I loved the way you portrayed this sort of weather as something positive and beautiful not just a pain in the a*s.

'The sky trembles with the wild beauty' Indeed!

Well done!

GBG - Leah xXx

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I love the rain as well. It is one of the only times I sleep well. Seems to chase the nightmares away. But there is something about summer rain but we have been having way to much of it here. LOL


Great Job!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

i'm going outside now, god, where is the lightning?

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

This is absolutely a pleasure to my senses to read! It's got such beautiful description. You should enter this in the contest about raindrops... Can You Stand The Rain... or something ike that. It's an awesome piece. Truly awesome.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

This is so wonderful, and it sounds like a truly beautiful thing to be able to witness! Thanks so much for sharing it with me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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