Someday

Someday

A Poem by Picture of Poetry

Someday,

   when the dark ages end;

   when the light blooms a free glance.

Someday,

   when the pain stops;

   when the happiness fills all hearts.

Someday,

   when the shelling stops;

   when love is your weapon.

Someday,

   when the evil dies;

   when beauty of good shines all over.

Someday,

   when sadness and death are gone;

   when the smiling faces appear again.

Someday,

   someday,

      someday,

         soon;

            when hope is the key...and the lock. 

© 2008 Picture of Poetry


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Very original and inspirational. =) I love this. Especially the last line! I'm in awe! This is another one of my favorites from you! "when hope is the key...and the lock." Love!!! =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love the style you put here..Shows how you hoping for that someday...Great write.. Very emotional and hopeful..like it a lot

Much love n respect,
Anna

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written. Great Job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good write.
Im usually not a fan of continuous repetition in works unless they are performance baised pieces but i liked this one. I think the continuous pattern really tied the piece together

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Picture of Poetry
Picture of Poetry

Atlanta,, GA



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My name is Jessica, but my friends call me Jess. I'm ___ years old. I love writing and reading as much poetry and famous literature as possible during my spare time. Basically, all day, every day is.. more..

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