Walk On The Beach

Walk On The Beach

A Poem by alyssa

a morning on the beach


I walk slowly on the beach

My head full of thought,

Listening carefully to the soft song of the waves

I felt like time was  paused

As if i had all the time in the world.

I wish it could last forever

That soft morning.. on the beach.



© 2008 alyssa

Author's Note

i'm trying my best on the peom..i'm just a beginer!

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This is really charming. It has a simplicity and ease to it. Makes me want to take my toes in the sand and feel the "squidgy" texture. :) Good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Growing up at the beach, I feel this. You say a beginner, will my friend you are well on your way. Nicely done!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

This definitely has the blissful appeal of the beach. Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago

wow...then you are a great beginner!!! i thought it was cool cause you just focused on this one moment of harmony, which made it like a dream. when i say it was like a dream, i mean that it was so peaceful and calm. when i read this i felt soothed.. nice write!


Posted 14 Years Ago

A beginner? Heck! You're better than me! You did a really wonderful job on this!
Keep up the awesome work,

Posted 14 Years Ago

Very nicely done! And that is just exactly how walking on the beach is...it is something you don't want to end! Great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago

I really enjoyed this piece, it's truly peaceful. Sometimes, we could all use a walk on the beach, to clear our foggy minds.


Posted 14 Years Ago

Nice start, I feel this one, that perfect time and place.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Great job Alyssa. Your thoughts and deepest feelings are portrayed to the reader and we are free to decipher the words as they strike us each individually. The beautiful thing about poetry.......it moves across waters of culture, history, emotion, and human instinct. As you develop your craft over the years, the mechanics will become natural and effortless. Well done my friend.


Bill :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago

I really enjoyed it. It had no rhyming, but that was the beauty of it. Very vivid imagery. Great job! = ]

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on July 16, 2008
Last Updated on July 16, 2008




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