Never To Atone

Never To Atone

A Poem by pinkasylum

The promises of heaven


We are whispered to in womb, enlightenment is God's passionate bed

pursuing with a slumbering, passive yet relentless reverant soul

weaving magical majestic sounds to cleanse the ancient holes

searching the celestial skies, the hidden truths beyond the knolls

spirits in a race for time n place, recognizing our journey's have no end

this hallmark, birthmark of life, becomes this haunting ruthless descent

spiraling down round our empty bowls of once spoon fed desires of heaven 

© 2011 pinkasylum

Author's Note

free verse

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Deep and a little disturbing the imagery contained within these lines, you really have a flair for the imaginative I especially love the end 2 lines

Spiraling down round our empty bowls of once spoon fed desires of heaven ~ beautiful, keep em' coming

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