broken heart

broken heart

A Poem by Sarah
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about someone who is in love

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What is the point of a heart,

When it only gets broken.

What is the point of breath,

When you only make me breathless.

What is the point of a sole,

When it only gets stolen.

What is the point of sight,

When you only blind me.

What is the point in my life,

When you only hurt it.

 

© 2011 Sarah


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Meaningful unanswerable questions from a broken heart...nicely written piece, Sarah...expresses the pain inside eloquently

Posted 8 Years Ago


questions that haunt everyone at least once in their life. very nicely written:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


a matter-of-fact set of statements :) good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It is bold and strong emotion. I'd love to see one explain how they still belong in a person's life after something like this. I dont think there is any defense.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like it. and yeah that is a nice question

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice write, love the question, what is the point?

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like this and no how this feels.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 2, 2011
Last Updated on September 28, 2011
Tags: love, sad, loss, leaving

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Sarah
Sarah

United Kingdom



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I am english and am 16 years old. I was born on 13th march. I live in washington in england. I write poems, short stories. books I like: Morganville vampires Fallen twilight harry potter. Fr.. more..

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