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A Poem by Jessi Webb =)

My heart longs and aches to be with you

 

I lay in my bed at night,

 

Crying about something that happend during the day,

 

Then your face pops into my head,

 

And I smile through the tears,

 

And I know everything will be ok,

 

You are mine forever and always.

 

My love for you goes far beyond understanding,

 

And I feel for you like I have never felt about anyone before .

© 2009 Jessi Webb =)


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I like the part about smiling through your tears. Its a good way to symbolize happiness.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like it! I like the part about smilig through your tears.... Yes my poem is about Zack is urs about Brady????

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its a really emotional poem.

But its also kinda cute.

Great work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a very sweet poem, to tell you the truth. I really liked it. :]
Keep up the great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aw, this was so awesome! Romantic, with plenty of heart and soul into this. Indeed, love, being in love, and being loved, is quite a feeling. Excellent job with this :)

B.A.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem...you can feel how real it is.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very touching.
Love the emotion.
I have no complaint on this poem..
Love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is ultra-sweet. It makes me feel very warm and fuzzy. Reminds me of puppy love as I experienced it. Good job! :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Jessi Webb =)
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Hey peoples ! My name is Jessi Webb, and I am a 12 year old girl . I am a young aspiring author . I believe that you are never really too young or too old to be an author . I believe that the true mea.. more..

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