You ...

My heart longs and aches to be with you

 

I lay in my bed at night,

 

Crying about something that happend during the day,

 

Then your face pops into my head,

 

And I smile through the tears,

 

And I know everything will be ok,

 

You are mine forever and always.

 

My love for you goes far beyond understanding,

 

And I feel for you like I have never felt about anyone before .

Reviews

[Voice11]

I like the part about smiling through your tears. Its a good way to symbolize happiness.

[Frog Girl]

I like it! I like the part about smilig through your tears.... Yes my poem is about Zack is urs about Brady????

[Jemma]

Its a really emotional poem.

But its also kinda cute.

Great work :)

[Cassandra D.]

This was a very sweet poem, to tell you the truth. I really liked it. :]
Keep up the great work!

[These Haunted Hallways]

Aw, this was so awesome! Romantic, with plenty of heart and soul into this. Indeed, love, being in love, and being loved, is quite a feeling. Excellent job with this :)

B.A.

[Lightfalls]

Nice poem...you can feel how real it is.

[...MysteryGirl...]

Very touching.
Love the emotion.
I have no complaint on this poem..
Love it!

[Beregond]

This is ultra-sweet. It makes me feel very warm and fuzzy. Reminds me of puppy love as I experienced it. Good job! :-)