the leader of the fallen angels

the leader of the fallen angels

A Chapter by Irvette Dauphine
"

they get all information of their jobs at their mind and they are in different hemispheres

"
-aray
where am i exactly?? i am at a really big white room with endless sky room. there's so many cloud around me. the last thing that i remember is i fell to a deep dark hole, with theo. i think i am alone here, until a voice call my name..

"Aray the Dark Light Angel" the strange voice
"how you know my name?!" i look around, but there's nobody here
"you're a leader of fallen angels" the strange voice continue what he said, don't care my question
"tell me, who are you? come here, show your face!" i ask him
"i am is you" he is giggles, i feel somebody walk to me "i am is Dark Light Angel" he is stand in front of me and i gasped

someone that exactly like me stood in front of me. he has one black wing, at the opposite side from me, and a pair of white wings mark on his chest. the different is he just like a shadow, not real. i can't believe it! it must just my dream, this is not true!! 

"you can say this is just dream, but yea this is real" he said, like he is can read my mind
"what do you want?!" i am ready to kill him
"whooaa.. don't be silly, i am here just want to introduce myself and working together with you" he said casually
"i don't understand" i confuse, what does he mean??
"okay, i am is dark light angel and from now i am is part of you" he start walking around, seem he want to talk much "you, or i can say we, are leader of fallen angel. but, we make military to destroy up humans and got up the world. what do u think??"
"that was i think at the first i be an angel" i said the truth
"so, we can work together, cant we??" he give his hand
"of course yes" i accept his hand

we blend together into one and i have another one wing, so i have a pair of black feather wings now. and i am now the true leader of the fallen angels, the Dark Light Angel!!

-theo
ouch.. my head still dizzy. the last thing that i remember is i am fell to a deep dark hole, with aray. i look around to this room and find out where i am. i am alone? where is aray?? where am i exatcly?!  this is a strange room, this room is white with strange cloud. and the roof is like endless sky. 

"Theo the White Night Angel" i heard strange voice from nowhere
"who are you??" i look around, i bet there's no body here
"hmmmmm...." i feel somebody walk to me
"how you know my name?!" i ask to him
"you're a leader of fallen angels" he is stand in front of me "and i am is you. how i don't who you are?" i gasped

someone stood in front of me, he is just exactly like me. he has one white wing, at the opposite side from me, and a pair of black wings mark on his chest. the different is he is just like shadow, seem not real. what is that?! that me? it can't be? this is dream??

"okay, you can say this is dream, but i am is real" he said
"don't understand" i am confuse
"i can't explain it" he said while walk around "i want to introduce myself, i am White Night Angel. that mean i am part of you and i want to work together with you"
"hmmmm..?" i am still don't understand
"you' re leader of fallen angels, you can lead the fallen angels to be guardian angels for humans to protect them" he said
"that what i want when i am be an angel" i said the truth "i want to be guardian angels and protect humans"
"so, can we work together??" he give his hand
"yes" i smiled and accept his hand

we blend together into one, i can feel his power go be mine. i have another wing and i am now the true leader of fallen angels. the White Night Angel!!


© 2012 Irvette Dauphine


Author's Note

Irvette Dauphine
sorry if i use the wrong words or my grammar messed up
enjoy the story~

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it's really good 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Irvette Dauphine

11 Years Ago

thanks~
Ruby

11 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
nice, i love the confusion :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Irvette Dauphine

11 Years Ago

thanks~
Jaxter_Nick

11 Years Ago

agreed
This is neat and I love it so far! I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Irvette Dauphine

11 Years Ago

thanks~
btw, for awhile i will not write because of school and later i'll edit all my writing... read more
Dominique

11 Years Ago

I know what you mean. I have so much work from school, its not even funny.
even when i was confused with the grammar errors, stil I loved this chapter. it was pretty interesting. i shall try and read the other chapters. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I can help you revise it but I wont tell you the corrections yet until you allow me...
INteresting with the loss of wing (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Irvette Dauphine

11 Years Ago

haha.. thanks~
well.. i have so many school task, so i can fix it..
maybe if i have much.. read more
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

yeah (;
i wish i could ahhh all day. this is getting even better.
although i didnt get one line.
"that was i think at the first i be an angel"

Posted 11 Years Ago


FrancescaX

11 Years Ago

it's a tough decision...it's not your fault. ha......so dreamy.
Irvette Dauphine

11 Years Ago

XD
FrancescaX

11 Years Ago

=D
I really enjoyed this ^_^
100/100
Waiting patiently for the next chapter.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Irvette Dauphine

11 Years Ago

thanks~
i dont mind really the grammar, besides i really this story of yours i hope you keep on writing.:)


Posted 11 Years Ago


Irvette Dauphine

11 Years Ago

thanks~
felli

11 Years Ago

your welcome
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I enjoyed the story very much, pls post more soon! 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

sure
Irvette Dauphine

11 Years Ago

thanks :)
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11 Years Ago

no problem :)

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i really like to read books!! and it would be awesome if i can write some story and be a great book writer.. in holiday and my free time i like to imagine stories and in my mood i like to write poems.. more..

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