Tye

Tye

A Poem by yourhaircutman

The distance grew like plants

the miles spreading like a disease

your heart grew fonder onto somebody else


I hope you're good.

© 2012 yourhaircutman


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Alm
This makes me sad and happy at the same time. Your comparisons and made simply, and in that state of not being complex makes it better. From the few words I get so many images.

And being able to let go makes you so much better.

-Alm

Posted 9 Years Ago


so much is described here in a few words, the time and space coming in between you two while the other drifts further away, but you never stop feeling something for them, it was organic and confessional, and it shows you have a big heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on May 31, 2012
Last Updated on May 31, 2012
Tags: pleasewritehome, sad, poem, distance, life, girl

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