Chelmsley

Chelmsley

A Book by Trish Farrell
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Magdelaine Chelmsley has the world at her fingertips. Enjoying the newly built Chelmsley hall and what she hopes to be an immensley successful season. But what you plan doesn't always happen.

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© 2010 Trish Farrell


Author's Note

Trish Farrell
I'm most interested in what readers think of the story, the writing style...etc. I will also appreciate any notes on grammar mistakes, etc. And will even consider suggestions on where the story goes as this is a work in progress. Thank you!

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I love everything about this. PLEASE ADD MORE!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


intriguing, bold, and it hooks you! great job!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I am sorry I never read this... it's excellent... 1 suggestion: add more!

Posted 14 Years Ago


great amazing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice write....and the flow is good.
I want the end.. lol
over all....
good joB!

Posted 14 Years Ago


i liked it. keep hitting it hard

Posted 14 Years Ago


a great job on this so far and a very enjoyable read...interesting to see how this all comes together..so far so good!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


read both chapters and it's freaking interesting. i like the characters in general and the storyline is pretty cool as well. can't wait to see what comes next...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I read both chapters right through one after the other and i thought that you have the start of a good story.
I do think that you should have somehing more happen in the first chapter, as thats where you will pull in the readers and a lot of people will give up and not reach chaper two.
there were a few spelling misakes that i saw mostly they look like typo's that you can probably spot with a good re-read.
This isn't usually the kind of story i read so you did a good job in keeping me going. though i think its the fantasy writer in me that kept waiting for something strange to happen. keep up the good work i'll be looking forward to the next chapter.



Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes I agree! It seems like it shall be good but lets see how you start it!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I have wanted to be a writer for as long as I can remember. I have read too many books to think about even adding up how many. My main area's of interest fall in historical romance with an occasiona.. more..

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